Haiku - 112 Poem by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

Haiku - 112

Rating: 5.0


time for the dream
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evening is coming

a next light is going out

general silence

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Barbara Korynt 05 August 2009

Your haiku is more and more good. You are keeping the 'discipline', imposed for that kind of writing. It is difficult, because there are no great possibilities of the manoeuvre here. After all it makes sense, you are located syllables and you are saving words. Contents are often an oblique statement which it is possible to add. And quite rightly. It is still giving the possibility to own interpretation. You are opening the doors in the process for the reader and you are encouraging everyone who has the willingness to it to the initiative. It is excellent exercise, too.. :)

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