A Seaside Picture Poem by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar
A Seaside Picture
a sunny weather
seagulls are flying so low
to the sea waves near
there is wet sand under feet
boy is building the castle
turret only stayed
is finishing it quickly
he is happy now
suddenly a bad surprise
and everything tumbled down
the same as the house
weak, because built from the cards
the dog is running
it is leaving only tracks
but it are transitory
our destroyed dreams
are a painful memory
it will often leave
permanent tracks on the heart
it is hard to remove them
you are a wise person.......... good poetry.
the same as the house weak, because built from the cards the dog is running it is leaving only tracks but it are transitory what sweet melodic floe of poem is...thoughtful, meaningful and heart touhing one..wonderful..and really very impressive one..liekd it 10/10
really nice poem can you tell what castle made is that you sorrow
Slow down; edit critically; correct all grammatical gaffes. drb
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/22/2024 4:53:10 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Very well written, insteresting poem. The last strophe is an excellent conclusuion. The realisation have the idea and the attempt very well. A knowledge of psychology and an ability are useful and observation too. Very much I like this poem. He isn't 'groaning' and a lot is telling the man, what is happening in the real life.Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt