Had About Enough Poem by Declan Gabriel

Had About Enough



Im just so sick without you
I guess love makes a guy less tough
looking in your eyes, with this feeling inside
I've had just about enough

And those brown eyes staring through me
All i did was look in amaze
My love wont fade like a flower
It wasn't just another teen phase

We spent lots of time together
It was the best, but now its a bit rough
I suppose with girls they get that way
play around, then just have enough

They always said we were the cutest couple
When your by my side, my smiles so wide cus im so chuffed
I think you and me were meant to be
But now I think you've just had enough

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeff Law 24 May 2007

i like the way you used the last line in the first four and then used it again but changed itto You in the lst line. class mate gives it a ten for me. xx J

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