Guessing Natural Sounds Poem by Evi Evi

Guessing Natural Sounds

Rating: 5.0


I walk by a river
Its songs I hear
I try to guess it
I try to adjust a beat;

I walk by a bush
I try to guess the crush
Of dry leaves
I try to adjust a beat.

Sunday, March 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: guess,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 25 June 2017

listening to the songs of the river guessing the crush in the bush.. very nice poem. thankyou very much. we try to put into words all experiences of our lives. thank you. dear poet. Tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 May 2017

A good start with a great listening to the nature activity. Thanks

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Ryson Dsouza 07 March 2017

This is living a really sound and aware life.. Appreciate and observe every single creation..Wonderful... thanks for sharing

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Chinedu Dike 05 March 2017

A well drafted poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Beautiful rendition of words elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Evi and do remain blessed.

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