Greed Poem by Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken

Greed

Rating: 5.0


Greed does not fill
the emptiness felt inside
For greed only provokes
and creates anything
one does not need to survive

Saturday, May 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: self control,self discovery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 20 May 2018

Greed is never smart, it always brings disappointments and failures, I reckon. A 10 for the vote.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 May 2018

You are very right. Greed does not fill emptiness. Satisfaction brings success. A thought provoking poem is brilliantly penned.10

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