Gratitude Poem by Smoky Hoss

Gratitude

Rating: 5.0


In the deep gold-glow of the setting sun
I saw the coyote
run by a Saguaro
dropping the scant remains of a mouse.
An Elf Owl,
nesting safely within the cactus,
espied all, as the coyote paused, then
trotted away, smiling.
The stolid little raptor watched
as the desert vagrant blended beyond recognition
into the rocky solitude,
then head turning, looked down,
then looked up, directly
into my wide-with-wonder eyes.
The owl winked at me,
swooped downward and took the carcass,
in complete silence.
In that solemn moment, assuredly,
I understood the purity of gratitude.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 16 December 2022

Grateful for any morsel do doubt!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 December 2022

Wonderful Smoky Bravo! ! !

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Belle Wassermeister 16 December 2022

Beautiful poem, Smoky! Five stars!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2022

A wonderful poem dear poet Smoky....I liked it.

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Susan Williams 01 February 2023

a million stars to light up the desert night watching over the coyote and the owl and the mouse who gave his life so that others could live---

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Susan Williams 01 February 2023

excellent, of course. I love how many different styles you use to write the words in your heart--this short story style is perfect for the tale of a coyote and elf owl and the cacti of the desert world--we too are grateful---grateful for your God-given gift of poetry

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M. Asim Nehal 18 December 2022

Excellent poem, liked it.

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Richard Wlodarski 17 December 2022

Not what I had expected re: gratitude theme. So, it was even more rewarding! Love it, Smoky!

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That was a very great experience, dear poet. Anecdotal poem, equally philosophical.5 *s

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