Grandma At The Bus Stop Poem by Donal Mahoney

Grandma At The Bus Stop

Rating: 5.0


If smiles had echoes
all the world would hear Grandma's
bouncing off the stars

Friday, February 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: grandmother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 10 February 2017

I don't often bother to rate poems, but I rated this one a ten!

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Kim Barney 10 February 2017

You call it a senryu; I call it a haiku, but either way, I love it. One of the best I've seen lately.

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