'' Goodbye '' Poem by Sham AlSaadi

'' Goodbye ''

Rating: 2.9


Tears went down
Smiles were fake
That night
When you walked away
I know
That it was upon you
But it's still really painful
To think about it too
What have gone
And what we had
Now it's all memories
Deep down in our hearts
Why should you leave now?
When I needed you the most
Like that day when you held me tight
While we were walking on the coast
And looked me in the eyes
Said '' I'll never let you go ''
But the sun came down
And the moon didn't show up
That night
When you walked away
Tears crawled down our faces
Smiles were faking
Cause neither of us
Wanted to be apart
And it's harder when we remembered
That night on the coast
We promised each others
That we'll never et go
And now it all disappeared
In a blink of an eye
And it all went back to that night
How could we break?
When you are my everything
And when in the coming days
Will I see you again?
To walk with me
To talk with me
To stand by me
Even in the pouring rain
See you packed all your things
Saw you waving goodbye to me
While I was faking a happy smile
The time stopped
And it flashed
To this night
Wished you could see the tears in my eyes
When you said to me goodbye

Dis you notice I was wearing your bracelet
Your favorite T-shirt
And my purple skirt
Also curled my hair
But even though I was scared
Not like ever before
I knew I was gonna get hurt
Than ever much more
So I held my heart
As u held your pride
Prayed to god
To help me through
The life now without you
Seems like a dark paint with blue
You're leaving when I 'm needing you the most
You've forgotten what you said on the coast
That you'll never let me go
But then said you don't want to hurt me
But you have some bad news
That you really love me
But you're sorry coz you're leaving soon
I was crashed, smashed, shattered, sad and mad
All the things you can think of which are bad
Coz you've broken your wards
Like you've broken my heart
So I sat alone on the corner
dreaming of that moment
no word no sentence
no move, no comment
just a smile drown
on my pale face
as I remembered how that rose has grown
and how it lost its vase
the place where she could settle down
and move away this haze
No, I don't care for the critics
I don't care for the praise
I just sit there, watching
as my heart he slays
but somehow my heart doesn't mind
as the price he pays
and now you're gone, I'm helpless
I'm lost, I'm in a maze
It's all pitch black
and my mind strays
loses all the meaning of life
as if it was hardly tasted
yet, I keep on smilin' to you
cuz whenever you're around
the sparkles in my eyes raise
and when you're no more
I fall down, I raze
And don't you ever worry
cuz for loving you, I have million ways a ways

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sham Alsaadi 07 November 2012

Thank you so much :) I believe it has sad meanings as you said, I guess all of my poems have this kind of feelings, Hope u read more of them :) thx again :)

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Unwritten Soul 03 November 2012

I confidence that this is your sad story that push you to pour all times in and melt it into an ink then you wrote it with full heart as you had at the moment...and the product is awesome poem with packed emotion, complex feelings and such a determine to complete this long poem...but someday i hope you find a way to make yourself smile again..and able to rise like rose and fly with butterfly...the broken can be fixed, hope it do for you_Soul

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