Good Bye + Poem by Eyan Desir

Good Bye +

Rating: 4.9


Thanks for the warm smiles,
The sweetest of care
The words that opened our mind
You taught well, they made us wise
The beauty locked in your heart
Touched hundreds of lives
Your laughter, the love
It brought joy we never had
The moments shared will satisfy
Many hearts until it's time

Let all mortal souls take note
Whiles tears water like rain
Behind earthly door
Are the pools of darkness
Waiting to wet their chest

Like a bird he flies
To God's celestial shores
Free from earthly chores
His soul, now waits
In God beautiful place
Let sweet memories
Wet our heads whiles sorrowful
Tears bounce off our face
If love could save lives
Your hearts wouldn't cry
The sad song good bye.




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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 01 July 2009

'If love could save lives Your hearts wouldn't cry'...if this is true then many hearts wouldn't cry....nicely penned...

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Antonio Liao 02 July 2009

i have to close my eye, just to see you; i have to keep my wings for you to fly... i have to hold my breathe just to let you live....all are just an entity to remember of your poem....excellent lines that create your wonderful poem....you shared rainbow to our lives.....thank you...a 10 + for you...

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 02 July 2009

you visualize the scene very well, your usage of clear and vivid images is powerful and the words you chose are just perfect, the poem flows smoothly, really simple and deep

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 02 July 2009

An excellent write, reads like a dedication of deep respect..wonderful imagery

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Nimal Dunuhinga 05 July 2009

The saddest word 'Goodbye' in the heart vocabulary. You spelled that warmly.

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Glory unto smile and sorrow And to God too Let it be vibe bon voyage 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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this is nice............ excellent.

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The Dreamer 13 July 2009

From the Heart a Perfect 10

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Sandra Martyres 12 July 2009

This is such a beautiful poem....a very touching good bye...10++

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J Lee 09 July 2009

Let sweet memories Wet our heads whiles sorrowful Tears bounce off our face If love could save lives Your hearts wouldn't cry The sad song good bye. It was a sweet n yet sorrowful gdbye but still love is in there I love tis last few sentence best. the...sad song....gdbte

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