darkness surrounds me I run in circles
yelling your name but you hear none
I'm told me your gone but I cant
believe such things I can feel
your hand looped in mine I hear you
calling my name and I can see you
standing beside me they say
your gone but how can that be true
when all I must do is close my
eyes to see your smile
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This poem is more universal, i like the way you have kept it short and yet very appealling... You have managed to take the reader into your imagination and left them at that place where they will have to choose what they want the poem to mean to them... Coz everyone has at some point in time lost someone important to them and the last two verses makes pple to think about that special person and smile, though they are gone! ! ! great poem! ! !