Golden Poem by Paul Judges
Golden
While the weather was still warm
they played in the fountains
and life seemed easy
it was natural to smile
we could see no white caps
on the distant mountains
our focus was on
this golden mile
it was time for the young
to get thoroughly soaked
and dry in the lenient
October sun
the adults just sat
quite still, and joked
recalling their days
of childish fun
at the back of their minds
was something like night
but far enough away
to put off till tomorrow
while the kids still played
it just wasn’t right
to admit there was anything
remotely like sorrow
SO GENTLE SO REAL AND YET SO LEVITATING. KEEP WRITING PAUL I AM READING YOUR POEMS TOO. AND THEY ARE EXEMPLARY.
Golden poem about golden moments of golden children in a golden sun You are completely right This kind of moments creates such a delight thanks for sharing it in such fantistic and melodious way. Hans
To get thoroughly soaked! With the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing.
Excellent conceptualization… ‘the adults just sat quite still, and joked recalling their days of childish fun’ ~ indeed down the memory lane… thanks for sharing … Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
A lovely poem, captivates the essence of life's golden moments. Enjoyed the read.; D
Really a golden poem. It has so much to say. very wel writen...................
Ah the last four lines say so much.....a wonderful finale to a great poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A very beautiful poem, a time for reminiscing and enjoying life. A good Write. Lynn