If the Sun were to show His love,
it would shine brighter than anything could.
It would blind my eyes, but still my head will not turn from this love.
For even blind, I can still feel the sun,
and the warmth that is understood.
ha what are you talking about you dont sound young in this poems, its not one of your best but the comparisons are imaginative and they work, i actually like the ending a lot, although blinded by the sun you wouldnt turn away becuz you could still fell the warmth as a referral to Gods love, its was brilliant,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful description and expression. I love the way you have placed your words and thoughts together. Deborah Cromer