God's Love Poem by kimber harrison

God's Love

Rating: 5.0


If the Sun were to show His love,
it would shine brighter than anything could.
It would blind my eyes, but still my head will not turn from this love.
For even blind, I can still feel the sun,
and the warmth that is understood.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deborah Cromer 01 August 2009

Beautiful description and expression. I love the way you have placed your words and thoughts together. Deborah Cromer

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Brianna Trombley 21 January 2009

ha what are you talking about you dont sound young in this poems, its not one of your best but the comparisons are imaginative and they work, i actually like the ending a lot, although blinded by the sun you wouldnt turn away becuz you could still fell the warmth as a referral to Gods love, its was brilliant,

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