God's Gift's Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken
God's Gift's
Blessed by gift's given
Numberless, nameless, noble things
.....Removing raindrops all too ravaging
Swept with sunshine - my soul sings.
Heart felt happiness of heavens
Growing much as gossamer wings
.....Paths to Paradise's plentiful playground
Capturing cloudless carefree days that it brings.
Showing smiles sweet sincerity & serenity
.....Candles cordial comforting light
Congregation of complete compassion
Bringing benediction's of benevolent sight.
By, Theodora Onken
May 9,2016
Brian, am so glad you liked my words. i believe paradise is any place of supreme happiness thus we can, indeed, experience it here on earth. Heaven for me - is the blessed home of those who have gone before us- residing with our God. Appreciate you reading and commenting! You are a stellar poet who i enjoy reading!
You had fun with this, didn't you? Playing with alliteration, playing with words- - - - - ] Candles cordial comforting light. That is sooooooooooooooooo lovely and so spot-on. I shall never look at a candle again without thinking of these gorgeous words. Yes, I do believe your soul is Swept with sunshine - my soul sings. Very very nicely done, Theo. Feels good when you nail it, doesn't it? ! ! !
Good use of alliteration in this honest poem celebrating the pure joy of living on God's Earth. Or God's Paradise in Heaven. Perhaps they're one and the same...?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Susan, yes, i did have fun with it. Originally written 3 years ago- spent much time editing. You are such a dear soul! Always look forward to your reviews! ! ! ! Waiting on another gem of a write from you! ! ! !
Isn't editing fun? Hahahaha! I don't know if it's a gem or not but I posted a new poem today. You are such a dear soul. You actually look forward to reading other people's poetry!