God Is Wearing Black Poem by JAIDEEP GARG

God Is Wearing Black

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THE god is wearing black
he is not coming back
he is gone
he is gone

God son is 6 feet down
and i searched him all around
i m wearing blue
cuz god is wearing black

he gave us all blue all sea and sky
i ask is he dead or alive
now he is hiding in black sky
hiding himself in bushes of lies
lies that he is with us
but his son died without asking us

god is wearing black
n i m wearing blue
he is not coming back
and now i don't believe u

he is hiding from his own creation
giving black death a motivation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Aarella 02 March 2009

A different feel and read Jai You have the talent to flourish keep writing All the best! ! ! ! ! !

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Anjali Sinha 25 November 2008

Yep I too feel like this sometimes and I ask 'Are you there'? nice piece Jai and u deserve ++10 regards anjali (read mine Are you there)

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

This is surely a great piece. Sarcasm, surrealism in right proportions make this a bitter sweet read. I very much concur with ur thoughts. I wrote on this subjects two poems: I AM GOD and I CHANT, CHANT AND CHANT. But your poem just touches the summit of excellence..........my heartufl votes.....10. Thanks for this piece.

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JAIDEEP GARG

JAIDEEP GARG

mathura u.p, india
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