Go Back To Being Children Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Go Back To Being Children

Rating: 5.0


Go back to being children
Shoulders touch each other
People can't stand alone
The door will finally open
I walked with you
Through the valley of happiness
And found a blue rose
Blooming on the Oriental snow

(dedicated to a great poet, Lawson Inada)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Beauty Philosophy 23 September 2009

A good reminder of childhood as the most critical period of one's life and personality bases. Read my poem CHILDHOOD.

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Joseph Poewhit 23 September 2009

Words have a simple beauty

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Kuji Soliman 23 September 2009

I love this poem as much as i love reading your poems.... :)

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 24 September 2009

very good one here. I am in the age of puberty and until now I remember my past memories. Awwwwwwwww

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Lynda Robson 06 October 2009

I like the sentiment expressed in this lovely write, 10 Lynda xx

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 26 September 2009

People can't stand alone-truth is told. Nice dedication poem...a 10

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Juan Carlos Abeti 24 September 2009

no words for it, it just delightful.

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Louis Rams 24 September 2009

this is an excellent write, and nobody rated it. i give it a ten

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Sameera Sameer 24 September 2009

love the way you write! ! great poem my friend :)

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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