Glass Tomb Poem by Ferdinand L Quintos

Glass Tomb

Rating: 4.3


I awoke as darkness
gave the night a kiss,
a reluctant goodbye
to yield the blue sky.

To the hall I did race,
to see the red flower
you set in a glass vase
with a love so tender.

I felt profound sadness
when I saw it was all
withered and lifeless,
petals began to fall.

The bloom is now a mess,
leaving only a scent
of decaying sweetness,
a joyless world’s portent.

As I gazed at the vase,
it became as a tomb,
all ready to embrace
my love you only doomed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 13 July 2013

The wilting flower and the falling petals are a joyless world’s portent.....very nice analogy. As I gazed at the vase, it became as a tomb, all ready to embrace my love you only doomed. Aha! The doomed love! Dear poet, by the way, May I be excused if I dare say: With a love so tender... Without the a would be better?

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Ferdinand L Quintos

Ferdinand L Quintos

Bayambang, Pangasinan, Philippines
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