They tell me to try try again.
Never loose hope.
But who are they to talk.
Are they living alone?
Seems like a great time.
To just give up.
But afraid of their comments.
As they'll stare with eyes of stone.
I look at my surroundings.
As the wind swishes by.
Now im top of the world.
Going somwhere unknown.
I just take one step.
To my new life.
No longer afraid of what if.
As I will be free to roam.
I keep falling down.
Cutting through my life.
As I feel the cold touch of death.
At last free from the gnawn.
I commented on this poem earlier but why these comments don.t appear on the poems page, I don't know. However my comments appear in my posts.
My angry teenaged daughter you have written a nice poem, by passage of time I wish and hope your thoughts will be a little changed.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great start with a nice poem, Malaika. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks