Gentle Venus Poem by Darlene Walsh

Gentle Venus

Rating: 2.5


Sitting on a chair of stone
Feeling regal on a throne
Really just a rocky slab
With sharp edge into me does stab

Sitting in my majestic chair
Without a worry or a care
On a hillside below the path
With sunlight for my bath

Washing life's cares away
Easing pains brought by day
Lush and green around my perch
Near my right looms mighty birch

Brightness arcing low in the sky
Through cloudless blue it does fly
Bathing light soothing and warm
And on the left tiny gnats do swarm

Nearby chirping is a melodious jay
My throne was bathed for hours today
Fevered granite comforting my back
Worries of the day my mind does lack

At my feet lays green valley wide
In the distance graceful birds glide
He told me today he loves me not
My heart now seems a great black knot

Sun lowers into the west afar
Behind in the east shines the first star
Fiery reds in front like warrior Mars
Behind gentle Venus washing the days scars

Brightness fades, new moon darkness
Sparkling uncountable in nights richness
Brightest of all rises gentle Venus
Of peace and love she is true genius

Sitting on my chair of stone
Feeling regal on a throne
Tomorrow life shall still go on
But in my heart will be no John

Thursday, February 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I love hiking and one sad day I sat in my favorite spot to watch a sun set, a warm rock ledge below the hiking trail high on a hill.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 12 September 2016

favorite lines so far: On a hillside below the path With sunlight for my bath and: Worries of the day my mind does lack..............sounds lovely! - - - - - - - - - -your Poet's Notes reminds me of a snake, sunning itself. At my feet lays green valley wide.........lies (and i don't mean untruths!) to avoid not/knot you could make a bit if a change..............., but NOT NOW. My heart now seems a great black knot. to.............My heart now seems full of rot. Sparkling uncountable in nights richness..............maybe night's? to be told i don't love you can prevent future pain, though at first it may cause you great mental strain. how's the family life, my good PH friend? ? bri :) any progress writing your books?

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