Gang Poem Poem by Gloria Rose

Gang Poem

Rating: 5.0


We came here as a family
We eat in a table like a big family
And loved each other
And appreciate each other
I never thinking about
Lying to you
Cause you are one of my siblings
Deep inside you k know that I loved you
But now I must say that
Things has changed for our family and us
You became someone else
Someone who everybody hates and abhorred
Even peoples who loved you before
Peoples who changed your life
Say that you become someone else
You don’t care anymore
About yourself, God
And your life
I never thought that it could happen to you
You made the biggest mistake of your life
That will haunt you every minute of your life
You can enjoy your life right now
But you will never believe the consequences
That could happen to you
I wish to you all that best and not the worst
Because I know that God will be the one judging you one day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 27 November 2009

very good write. keep it up and watch your wording when you tell your story.

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Romeo Della Valle 22 November 2009

Very deep and heart touching poem. you got great talent and you are very young, too, keep it up, you have a long path to travel and a lot to show to the whole world...Love and Peace, RDV

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Lago Lago 18 November 2009

lovely write........... nothing go like this............ deep inside something none should be blamed........... with smile smile smile..........

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