Just A Smile Poem by Gloria Rose

Just A Smile

Rating: 5.0


Get over it
Get over your pain
And your fake friends
Who doesn’t like you for who you are
Don’t just see it like it was a bird
Stop pretending that you are one of them
Go to a free space
And open your eyes
You will see your real life
A life that is not fakes, like your friends
A life with magic
Magic that you couldn’t believe
If you don’t believe me
Come closer to the one
The one that you loved
The one that you want to be friend with
Not the one that is trying to pretend around you
Come the one who your heart is directing you
Because, the way that your heart is going
Its safe, ant it will bring you joy
Just smile to see it

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 16 November 2009

this is lovely gloria 10

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John Knight 17 November 2009

Hi Gloria - This is a very positive poem - advice helping your friend to move from PAIN (L 2) to JOY (L 20) . I score it TEN. What is the answer? The PAIN comes form FAKE FRIENDS and trying to emulate their life style. Your advice is to seek FREE SPACE and a REAL LIFE and a REAL FRIEND - someone who brings you JOY and not PAIN. 'Come closer to the one you loved'. Someone who is REAL & SAFE not FAKE & EPHEMERAL. The result will be JOY and a real SMILE. 'Just smile to see it'. Love in Poetry - JOHN..

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Ken E Hall 17 November 2009

Very nice poem on so called friends a true friend is magic Well composed in freeform with a luvli smile+++10 regards

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Nimal Dunuhinga 17 November 2009

A fine elixir and it's not just a smile, good luck to my young poetess!

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Afzal Shauq 17 November 2009

The one that you want to be friend with Not the one that is trying to pretend around you Come the one who your heart is directing you Because, the way that your heart is going Its safe, ant it will bring you joy Just smile to see it a sweet romantic poem, writtb professionally..I really appreciate the idea and the way you wrote..well done..liked it 10/10

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Afzal Shauq 05 August 2010

a master piece type poem is this one..i read so many time and enjoyed it very much..well done dear poetry friend and thanks for all your work that you done for me in french..thanks

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Danny H 01 December 2009

Extremely good advice :) and kind words

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Kassiah Gervaise 26 November 2009

a well done job...makes you think...it's ok.

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C. P. Sharma 23 November 2009

There is all the bliss in an innocent smile. Well penned. CP

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 November 2009

A LOVELY POEM..VERY POSITIVE AND A GOOD FLOW

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