Dont Love Me Poem by Gloria Rose

Dont Love Me

Rating: 4.9


You know that I have a crush no you
Deep inside my heart
I can’t stop thinking about you
Because, when I try so hard to forget you
I end up falling for you
We are not meant for each other
Because we are too different
You are hot
I`m cold
You are popular and I’m lonely
And our skin color is not the same
We can’t have each other
I don’t want to fall for you
Because, maybe you will not feel the same as me
You are just sitting there
Looking at me with your dreamy eyes
Can’t you see in me that I’m dying for you?
Your love is killing me
It’s like a poison
That I’m afraid to try
I just wish that all of this was a fairy tale

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rehana Nazli 18 November 2009

Fantastic, a blend of real fears of unknown and falling for someone vey different from you. Expressed very beautifully.10/10

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Romeo Della Valle 18 November 2009

Groria love is love, by any given name, and feelings are feelings, freely expressed through poetry, I have been there many, many times, check my page and you will see...well penned, you got my vote,10+++, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Eyan Desir 19 November 2009

Love don't chose and its a chance we have to take but its up to you well expressed

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That's really sweet, but also kind of sad. You shouldn't worry about how different you two are. If there is real love, then it's right. You know, they say opposites attract...

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F.M.L argh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 01 December 2009

nawww that is so cute and so true....... your pretty good at wrighting poems keep it up...

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F.M.L argh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 01 December 2009

nawww that is so cute and so true....... your pretty good at wrighting poems keep it up...

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Kimberly Lindsey 26 November 2009

Gloria, young one, you have written of a quandry that many adults can not even decide upon. I am impressed with ability to to put into words feelings that many would not even admit to themselves. Brave girl! Now, may I say that at your age you do not even have to make that decision at this very moment. You have much time ahead to worry about love.... then again, first love is always the sweetest, but the most painful. You receive a 10, for elaboration and your courage to be honest with yourself, AND because you did a great job!

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Part of love is taking risk and seeing where it takes from that position as I see love like this Love has no age limit, color or even culture but the way you feel for one another that counts most...so embrace love don't fight it and fulfill your heart's desire 10/10

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