Galaxy Poem by Juan Rios

Galaxy

Rating: 5.0


Thy screaming heart is infused with the darkness of the galaxy; were light cannot be seen by the naked eye but can only be sensed by the darken flames in the other hearts. They are a few with very faint light that shines like a star so small yet so bright that can shine through any darkness and still sense through the darken flames of my heart. There are those that try to bring light into mine but my darkvben heart rejects it and casts it out. It is tolled that there is a light that shines above all that wants to bring my heart into happiness and warmth. If it does happen we will build a new sun that shines into every darken heart and extinguish the darken flames thatKx is found and that happiness of shall brighten thy galaxy.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In ways its about all my past relationships lol its just that I've been threw alot
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 23 October 2012

Congratulations! Your cosmic and creative imagination clearly show your depth and thought provoking talent! WELCOME! Juan, this is your first write and hope it is not your last for you have plenty to offer to the Poetry World! By keeping it up, reading other poets works and enriching your writing skills along with your knowledge, your will have the opportunity to make it to the top of the Poetry World one day! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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