G.R.A.Y Poem by Kiki Marie

G.R.A.Y

Rating: 1.8


Feeling lonely and displace, yet secure within the silence.
Dropping down into a pit of dispair.
This pills is taking me somewhere.
Only half way.
To what everyone else calls normal.
&& i.call.gray.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravinder Malhotra 28 November 2009

This sentiment of despair could have been handled much better. Work on this again!

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