Full Blooded Passion Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Full Blooded Passion

Rating: 2.8


the soul trails
everywhere
my eyes see
prisons
my body only
grieves and cries
i could be rainbow
the spring
the trees that
start budding
a riotious green
or the lightning
that gives way
to roaring thunder
my physique
cast to track
divine pleasure
and vengenace
in full blooded passion

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raynette Eitel 29 May 2006

This poem comes from a fresh idea, John. Some of the verb forms need working on, though. I'll write you a note about it. I love the choices you make following 'I could be...' Raynette

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***** ********* 29 May 2006

Wow! John this is certainly a poem that suits it's title. We can be whatever we want to be, it is up to us. I prefer the fresh air blowing through my life but you have to be bold to hold that moment. Grinning at you, Tai

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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