Frozen In Time Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Frozen In Time

Rating: 5.0


Frozen in time
but eyes still see
sequence of events
still pass me by
abstract images
running through
my mind

Future past and present
one long line

Wednesday, October 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 24 October 2018

Your few words have captured an eventful life. Wonderful to read.

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Paul Brookes 25 October 2018

Life can look linear but that's because we often think in straight lines I Likes this it has the essence of truth Great write

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Bryony Sheldon 01 August 2019

A thoughtful, evocative and eloquent poem! 10+

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M Asim Nehal 29 October 2018

Time to do introspection, a thoughtful poem.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 October 2018

Eyes still see! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Tom Allport 25 October 2018

A thoughtful write of our position in space and time? ...well penned Dave

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 October 2018

Eyes are wonderful creations in human face. Eyes magically capture vision and spread vision. An amazing poem is beautifully penned.10

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