~ From Fathomless Skyline ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
~ From Fathomless Skyline ~
~ From Fathomless Skyline ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
June 18,2010
From fathomless skyline
Hear deep carmine call.
My bosom like
Mellifluent octave
Swing sway why
In your melodic palm?
Your spry eyelids
Ruffle and flutter
Fluffy zephyr
Echoes ethos unzips
My bosom why?
Why these indolent
Illusionary indulgences
Creeps in me for more?
Fantasy faerie snuggle
In arms me no more
Biz buzzes kibosh n’ o’er
Better be as e’er ne’er
All izz virtual not real
O’ my chummy pal
Listen me ~ Better
Own my aching finery
In your deep recess trove
As lofty leisure luxury.
Lilt bedeck aurevoir
Open brink of gate.
Just a moment
Let me say
O’ Poetry
Go to flowers
Make them blithe happy.
A moment more
O’ lambent Venus
Sing temptingness
Affable agleam adieu.
From fathomless skyline
Hear deep call
O’ palsy-walsy
Pal listen me why not?
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Glossary: With humility some glossary given for what I tried to express.
[1] Chummy ~ [used colloquially] having the relationship of friends
[2] Faerie ~ The enchanted realm of fairies
[3] Blithe ~ Carefree and happy and lighthearted
[4] Temptingness ~ The power to entice or attract through personal charm
[5] Affable ~ Diffusing warmth and friendliness
[6] Palsy-walsy ~ [used colloquially] having the relationship of friends
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beautiful! i hope i can be like you but of course it's a dream: D thanks for sharing
Very soft and lithe poetry…crossed the world of virtuality to reality …the words are live and alive with all brilliance and brightness …canvas and emotion are very befitting and very much heart touching… ‘A moment more O’ lambent Venus Sing temptingness Affable agleam adieu…’ this reminds me the play Othello where Othello before assassinating Desdemona…asked for one more kiss… 10+
Mellifluent fountain ... in rilling splendor…readers ‘tour de force’… ‘From fathomless skyline’ we’re hearing not adieu …but lambent Venus Singing temptingness melody…finest emotion in luxury of lachrymation…very well done Ma’am 10++
Classy Poem…adieu made very touchy and appealing… ‘O’ my chummy pal Listen me ~ Better Own my aching finery In your deep recess trove As lofty leisure luxury.’…here the poem has reached to the acme of emotion unlimited…in a melancholy easel…to me this melancholy has become magnanimous… unstinted… munificent… bounteous-vibe… 10++ Dr. V.
Great I feel- but at this age I am not able to fathom the real meaning and import!
Great I feel- but at this age I am not able to fathom the real meaning and import!
The voice can die out if unheard. Hope the You of this poem heard. Hope for the best, always. Be happy :)
Wisdom manifesting itself through you, my friend, deep and excellent write!
Amazing use of words they just floated on air as I read it.Nice use of metaphors. Thank you for sharing.I am jealous I can't write half as well as you lol.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/27/2024 6:44:25 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This poem drew my attention because of my poem - 'Visions of the Deep Blue Emphyrean'! Your poem is well written from a new angle! Notes are always helpful due to the cross section of our readers! -Raj