'Friends Are Like Trees' Poem by Bryan De Poet

'Friends Are Like Trees'

Rating: 5.0


For a record,
A best friend covers your past from floating to the present life!
Though we also have,
Next-door friends.
Worldview friends.
Cross-culture friends.
Financial friends.
Mentor friends.

Don't quote me wrong but,
Girlfriends and boyfriends are like florets,
They bloom, fly, fall and dry.
While your friends will be crafting more brush-woods,
Each brushwood with abound leaves.
Friends are as mightier as a pen.
A clement friend will collate all the early worms for his/her friend!
A horizon friend will always transcribe and send missives.
A barnstorming friend can be amiable,
A friend's cuddle and trust is glory!
True friends wipe off the tears trailing through your cheek
Friendship is a heart of trust.
Friends are like trees,
Trees grow and craft other brush-woods!
Friends are synonymous to trees.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Okullu 03 July 2017

bryan, i think the first stanza is perfect. it sets itself with a distinctive voice. i do think you should re-write the second stanza. it somehow veered of the tone and mood and attitude you set in stanza one. its difficult to differentiate between the narrator, and you the poet; you ve mingled everything up.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 August 2013

Yes, A true friend wipe of the tears and friendship is a heart of trust. Beautiful words...Well written. Liked reading it.

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