Friends Poem by Aditi Joshi

Friends

Rating: 5.0


Friends are like stars around moon,
They charm us every morning and noon,
Everything is shared with them,
I have choosen amongst them.
One hour study is enough for us,
Another hour is meant for just,
Solutions for problems are found out easily,
Because of which problems comes in rarely.
I am one of lucky persons between them,
Who have group full of pranks.
On every achievement they stand by me,
In every problem they sit by me.
I thank God for giving me friends,
With whom every picture doesn't comes to end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 31 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Aditi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thanks

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Aditi Joshi 16 March 2012

Thank you sir, For your encouragement.... I will surely correct my lines. Thank you Dave sir, I will read your poem... Yup friends are best persons in the life...

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Tarrakkul the Gazzel 11 March 2012

Oh that is a lovely, lovely poem! It is wonderful! One small tip: in your line I have choosen amongst them., choosen is actually not a word, chosen is better, or chose. Thank you so much for writing this poem :)

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Dave Walker 11 March 2012

To have good friends is the best. A great poem. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Holy Man.

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