Fragile Poem by Arvie Calimlim

Fragile

Rating: 5.0


Found myself near the shore
Waiting for the waves to reach my feet
Waiting just a little more
For my heart to find peace in it

Tried to break the water
Tried to drown all my tears
Tried to alter the change
Tried to scare away my fears

I break into a million pieces
Not knowing how to go back
I thought I was unbreakable
But I shattered with a crack

Never knew how fragile I was
Always thought I was strong
But now I know better
That what I thought was wrong

I tried to pick the pieces of me
But I didn’t find it all
Afraid to lose myself
But not scared to fall

Somehow the waves will reach my feet
I know I still have the will
The will to keep on living
The will to stand still

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jemima Cabanlong 05 September 2009

amazing. the words were well weaved together. awesome.: D

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Nashy Lamen 26 July 2009

The flow of the poem... THe strong emotions, . The beauty of your words.. Very good! ! ... Keep on writing...

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Danzen D. 24 July 2009

Still and moving like the waves...yet I wonder..why are you alone? Nice poem! Keep writing!

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Sky and sea, in other word, wind and waves console our hearts.10.

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