Maybe Forever Poem by Arvie Calimlim

Maybe Forever

Rating: 4.0


My eyes wandering
My heart pounding
My mind doubting
My soul searching

Wandering across the sea
Pounding with all its might
Doubting about the facts
Searching for what’s right

The sea was just tranquil
But my heart just seems to cry
The facts were all true
But my soul was hard to satisfy

I need some peace of mind
I need someone to love me
I need to accept the truth
I need to find my identity

Peace to keep me focused
Love to keep me kind
Truth to set me free
Identity to be not blind

Focused on things I do
Kind to people I see
Free to do what I want
And just to be me

Things that I do
To people I see
And to be free
Free to be me

I tried to achieve these
But then I failed again
But I wont give up
Though it reaches a billion ten

My eyes wandering nonetheless
My heart beating even harder
My mind doubting all the more
My soul searching, maybe forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danzen D. 24 July 2009

Searching seems long...but believe in yourself, and you will find. There will come a time when it seems everything is lost..the directions are wrong..the paths are gone....but go straight where your heart leads you, never give up, and you will suddenly see that object you've been searching and cherish it. ^_^

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Lorena Cruz 28 June 2009

your best poem yet! !

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Nothern Cross 19 June 2009

A sad but relaxing poem, i sympathize with your suggestion that identity is forged through love, i'd like to add though, that this isn't limited to only romantic love.

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