Forgiven Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Forgiven

Rating: 4.6


Under the tree of forgiveness
We sat for hours
Cross-legged, cross minded,
Our short-lived breaths started colliding
With the wings of wind.
The bark I leaned against seemed rough
As you have pampered my skin
Since time immemorial.
Cruelty of silence also proved unbearable
Until you broke it into pieces with
Your words of affection.
And we found reciprocity as
A common page in our books of life.
For true love always knows how to excuse
The flaws of innocent hearts.

Friday, November 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: forgiveness,true love,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2015

Tree gives the teaching of forgiveness. This is a very nice quality. Cruelty of silence does not mean anything in front of forgiveness. Forgiveness is great imagery here. Fantastic sharing. Nice poem.10

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Loke Kok Yee 13 November 2015

making up cements love-10 thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 November 2015

Your words of affection; helping us to overcome affliction. Nice work.

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Valsa George 14 November 2015

Cementing up broken relationships is always rewarding! Enjoyed what took place under the Tree of Forgiveness!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 November 2015

You described the power of the words of affection. True love develops from there. Beautiful poem.

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Sumit Ganguly 13 November 2015

Love forgives all flaws-eternal truth.Thanks for sharing.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 November 2015

Cute drop! ! Thanks for sharing.

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