Sanjukta Nag

Gold Star - 21,101 Points (05-07-1992 / India)

Forgiven - Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Under the tree of forgiveness
We sat for hours
Cross-legged, cross minded,
Our short-lived breaths started colliding
With the wings of wind.
The bark I leaned against seemed rough
As you have pampered my skin
Since time immemorial.
Cruelty of silence also proved unbearable
Until you broke it into pieces with
Your words of affection.
And we found reciprocity as
A common page in our books of life.
For true love always knows how to excuse
The flaws of innocent hearts.

Topic(s) of this poem: forgiveness, true love, relationship

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Forgiven by Sanjukta Nag

  • Gold Star - 45,404 Points Valsa George (11/14/2015 12:57:00 AM)

    Cementing up broken relationships is always rewarding! Enjoyed what took place under the Tree of Forgiveness! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 11,634 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (11/13/2015 3:15:00 PM)

    You described the power of the words of affection. True love develops from there. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,261 Points Sumit Ganguly (11/13/2015 8:56:00 AM)

    Love forgives all flaws-eternal truth.Thanks for sharing.10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,192 Points Anil Kumar Panda (11/13/2015 7:39:00 AM)

    Cute drop! ! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,724 Points Loke Kok Yee (11/13/2015 7:20:00 AM)

    making up cements love-10
    thanks (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 51,817 Points Kumarmani Mahakul (11/13/2015 7:07:00 AM)

    Tree gives the teaching of forgiveness. This is a very nice quality. Cruelty of silence does not mean anything in front of forgiveness. Forgiveness is great imagery here. Fantastic sharing. Nice poem.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 13, 2015

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