For Phoebe Poem by Angela Wybrow

For Phoebe



Those words you wrote; those words I read,
Are stored very safely inside my head;
They only took you moments to write,
But, into the darkness, they injected some light.

As I lay awake in my bed next door,
About everything, I was feeling unsure;
But then your words, thoughtful and kind,
Exploded like fireworks into my mind.

Inside my mind, your words whizzed around,
And lifted me up when I felt so down;
You wouldn't believe the comfort they brought -
Your words of encouragement and positive thought.

I doubt you considered the consequence,
But their effect on me was pretty immense.
I'd like to thank you for the comment you wrote,
And, when I was drowning, for keeping me afloat.

Saturday, December 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,positiveness,words
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is about my 12 year old neighbour, Phoebe, who said some positive things when I was feeling down.
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Angela Wybrow

Angela Wybrow

Salisbury, Wilts, UK
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