Lines on the table, heart aching.
offers ringing in my ear.
Guys telling me what i wanna hear,
feeling on my leg, lifting up my skirt
I take a sniff, no longer feeling the hurt.
waking up, no longer in the same place.
I call my friends' name, no longer see their face.
Search for my clothes, not on the floor.
Run out the hotel, don't care anymore.
High as h*ll, body sore.
What happnt last night, don't kno for sure.
I go to the guy, ' what the heck did you do? ! '
Smiling cocky, he says, ' you told me to f**k you.'
I nod remembering, I'm to blame..
It's ok, , I tell'em it's ok.
Smile and walk away,
This is the begining of my everyday.
really dear what can i say about this poem of yours.........its really a poem that a proffessiona poet cant write......when i read the poem i just thought that i was seeing a play really you have the ability to write more and more poem keep it up friend thanks
WoW! i love this piece, it's like a play, a story. Easy to follow! The emptiness protrayed by the 'character' is so clear to see. Really great poem! : -)
it's sooo not oh well... they got what they deserved at the end as you and i both know... so bump them..... live...move on.... remember..... let go&let god girl... he and I both got ya back....
I despise the illogical format you have, but this one was actually really well played out. I have a sense of what this portion of you life is like.
WoW lol I Love dis writting you did... You Like To Keep It Hood lol 10***
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow! Dats deep. Kudos