Foes & Friends Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Foes & Friends

Rating: 5.0


Sky is angry with me as I said once a dark sky.
Ocean is angry with me because I said her language is hoarse.
Stars are angry with me as I found they are infinite?
Only the needy are friendly with me,
As I know how much they saved in the banks?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yonela Mali 23 October 2006

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! great work once again nimal

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Joe Breunig 12 October 2006

A lovely write; I can feel and appreciate the emotion of this piece.

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Sandra Fowler 12 October 2006

A small gem of a poem. Very well written, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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nimal dunuhinga

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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