Flash Thought Poem by Savita Tyagi

Flash Thought

Rating: 5.0


Inspiration
Knowledge
Bliss
Trio of divinity.

Inquiry
Reason
Purpose
Trio for humanity.

On a clear path
Goddesses carried me through
Now in the rustic corridors of life
Old stones of set boundaries
Getting loose.

A plant on the table-
Back of it hidden from eyes
Its shadow decorating the wall
Seems perfect
Beautiful!
Hidden is revealed there.

Standing upon a red light
Not knowing the direction
Tired
Disoriented
Wishing
Wondering
Waiting
For a green arrow
To appear
To pull
To reveal.

Light
Harbinger of movement
Circled in frozen movement
The treachery of shadows
Forest unknown
So appealing
Drawn to terrifying darkness
I wish to sink deep
The stretched out ambiguity
Irresistible.

Thursday, April 11, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: reflections
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Title for this poem was provided by my son. Some time he is the first reader and evaluator of my writing.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 13 February 2016

Although we, europeans, do not refer to divinities, because we, .mostly, are not believers as americans, this here poem of yours is a very very good, real, poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 August 2015

Nicely penned poem specially the following lines Forest unknown So appealing Drawn into terrifying darkness I wish to sink deep The stretched out ambiguity Irresistible.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 11 April 2013

the state of our mind at a particular point of our life...I can connect with this poem, not now, but once upon a time..well written

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