Flame Poem by chantel weston

Flame

Rating: 4.5


my flame
never died it never
even flickered
or wavered in any way.

even though i tryed
to 'move on'
i still couldnt let you go.

i held on
with a wonded hand
and a part of my heart
that ididnt even know i had.

and even as i tryed
to force my mind to say 'forget it
he left you! '
my heart still scremed for you.
and some times
i could make myself
beleive that i felt you
laying next to me
could feel your arm wrap around me
and could hear you say
'i'm right here.'

and at times
thats more then i
can bear.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tessa Monaghan 20 January 2009

*tear* i actually can relate to that. im really sorry that all this had to happen to you! anyways, love it! you really do have the sense for poetry! its definitely a natural skill for you! i mean look at that poem you wrote for eng.! ! ! ! ! dang haha. luv ya! ~Blondy

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Kt Reynolds 27 September 2008

I like it! kudos for you ^.^ The last 3 lines are like epic. It's...awesome? *hope you know what I mean* XOxo Jade Harmony xoXO

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chantel weston

chantel weston

portland, Oregon
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