First Success Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
First Success
What am I?
Why do I try?
What shall be proved?
I am shaken and moved
Why people ask?
About my simple task
Raise controversy
And make me look silly
I am as simple as flower
Occasioned by rainy shower
There was no chance
As poet even at once
I did first poem
“Miss I miss you” and left to them
It was blot from blue
Poem clicked through
It was first success
Many comments brought shine on face
“You go to hell” one of readers commented
That made me to smile instead of being resented
I loved the scene
Pleasant one to be seen
To feel and observe
I never knew I deserved it
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owerful Mikarlsky Dume3 minutes ago you're awesome at what you do Comment +1 passionate
Newton Kibiringi2 minutes ago nice thing to endure all and emerge vitorious
nice himanshu singla3 minutes ago nice Comment +1 Hmmmm
Kate Sun3 minutes ago Your overall tone and mood is great! There are some confusing parts where your thoughts seemed to be oscillating between two different emotions. In that way, it was a bit too introspective of yourself. I could not relate
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What am I? Why do I try?