First Pearl Poem by Eyan Desir

First Pearl

Rating: 5.0


Tender desires,
Birth a jewel for the eyes
Curved with alluring shine
To pierce blue dusky skies.
Mother to the earth,
Beguiled with clever charms
Cursed by the divine
For the forbidden dance.
'twas then cold
Within her hallow shell
and like a rose
she unfurled
It was welcome beauty
To his sour life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 30 July 2010

‘To pierce blue dusky skies.’ ~ Indeed a pair of loving eyes do so…eye-candy… thanks sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Lalitha iyer 22 July 2010

Thks Eyan, Thks for the enlightening message...........Really I did not understand it atfirst that the poem is about ADam and Eve...........nice........now I understand in full length...........It is an interesting idea and its a good piece

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Lalitha iyer 20 July 2010

Nice....touching..........soft emotions flowing.............

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Lady Grace 17 July 2010

first, i would like to say that the title is nice.i like it...the content is brief, poetic and lovely...so, girls play an important roles to men's lives...this poem is nicely done..

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