First Born Poem by Lori Boulard

First Born

Rating: 3.5


Attempting to go back and improve
some of my earlier work, I suddenly
realized that poems are like our children:
you love them just the way they are,
even if you know they’ll never be a doctor.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jerry Hughes 01 January 2006

Excellent Lori, love pithy poems like this one.

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Ernestine Northover 05 November 2005

I had a chuckle at this one, Lori, I must admit one can get very attached to ones poems, I suppose they are the fruits of our labour. Sincerely Ernestine

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Peter A. Crowther 05 November 2005

This one made me smile. It rings so true.

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Danni Doodles 04 November 2005

Just brilliant. My sentiments exactly.

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