004 A Really Good Song Poem by Lori Boulard

004 A Really Good Song

Rating: 4.8


a really good song has your throat by the first eight-count
owning your heartbeat as it opens up wide

it lays on your tongue smooth as chocolate
then bites down hard like good whiskey

a really good one sticks to your brain like dementia
and doesn't let go until it is through with you,

sinking in deep like an old friend, pumping rhythm
intravenously like a sweet soul transfusion

it begs your body to shut up, shut down and let go
drowning every pore in melodic waves of ecstasy

rattling your spine with such a shock wave
as coffee and greater sins could only dream

like sex without the consequences
instant zen, yours for the taking

a really good song, if it is really good
stamps your soul with a reminder

of who you are, were, or can be
when you are better than you ever thought possible

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raynette Eitel 31 October 2005

If I could give you a twenty on thin one, I would. There are so many good images, it is hard to choose the best, but I think my favorite is 'pumping rhythm intravenously like a sweet soul transfusion' or perhaps 'instant zen, yours for the taking.' Thanks for this. I am bookmarking it. Raynette

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Uriah Hamilton 31 October 2005

Super dug this one, especially the dementia line.

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Ivy Christou 01 November 2005

now this is a Classic! A really good song deserves a REALLY good poem like yours! keep up the good work! HBH

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Robert Howard 09 May 2007

Wow, what a wide open and vivid tribute to the power of music with lines to match the finest of musical phrases!

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Duncan Wyllie 21 March 2006

Also, 'YOU ARE MY SISTER' by same artist

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Duncan Wyllie 21 March 2006

This is amazing, it has such depth and meaning to so many, including myself. A Really Good Song? 'HOPE THERE'S SOMEONE'by ANTHONY AND THE JOHNSONS I really cried at this one when I felt the pain contained, and oh what a voice.

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Scarlett Treat 02 March 2006

Loved this one so much that I even emailed it TO MYSELF! ! Scarlett

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John Tiong Chunghoo 06 November 2005

dear lori, i really love this one!

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