Fire Poem by ashley fulford

Fire

Rating: 5.0


shall i say what i truely am
a pyro by day
or a demon by night
playing in the eternal fire
A light burning so bright
burning the forest of the night
Fire...
is all i know....
is all i enjoy
it's what you are
your the one who lets me feel...
the love, the desire, the heat, the passions
you are a fire burning so wild and free through out my heart
a flame never to be tamed
and now i am the same
you've tempted me to burn forever with you
yet never be trapped
we are to be as wild and as free
as a single flame flickering at the middle of the night
and being each others only light
a fire so hot shall show my love true
and forever i shall burn with you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jay Boyd 22 August 2009

alot of emotions id like to discuss this poem on a later note

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Obinna Eruchie 04 September 2009

How the voice feels she is around him like fire mild at one time, and fierce at the other time. Interesting.

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Iron Panda 23™ 16 February 2010

this...is AWESOME! ! ! !

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Eyan Desir 28 November 2009

Very hot my tongue almost burn..hehe I liked it I will read more of your work

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Merna Ibrahim 19 October 2009

Very interesting and the passion in this poem is as the Fire! ! Thanks for sharing :) Merna..

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DaNa XxX 24 September 2009

dear ashley, i found your poem quite interisting... what a great job you did here..^_^ keep it up my friend :) DaNa...

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Stephen Magill 04 September 2009

great poem and for a lot of reasons i find it very interesting. steve

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