Frozen Poem by ashley fulford

Frozen



the warm breeze rushes ove his skin
as she lays a kiss upon his lips
for 7 months they have been
lost in this moment as one
on the day of her birth
he goes to see her
but what he sees froze his heart
it's her in another mans arms
holding her tightly
seeming never wanting to let go
the flowers he bought...
were thrown to the ground
tears falling from the corners of his eyes
he loved her
and now that love is frozen in time
away for 3 years
now he has returned
and so has she
with 2 kids and a young baby
her lover no longer with her
so as you may guess
she wants to go back
back to her first love
but it will never be
for his love for her
will forever remain in time frozen.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Iron Panda 23™ 16 February 2010

woahnesss! ! ! what a story! ! ....i liked it...alot! ! ! !

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Obinna Eruchie 04 September 2009

Fire is now ice in his heart, and she came back-complicating issues not only for herself, but for her children. Keep writing to be more creative.

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Ronald Doku 31 July 2009

wow! ! ! ! that was great. you are really are improving. you really are creative. i liked the idea behind it. two thumbs up -_-

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