finesse! !
is a clear finesse I feel seeing you,
wonder, if at all you know in total of you!
any expression of you is so precise,
makes me understand more than your words in surprise!
never I have to rake my mind,
all I understand is always so profound!
much that even if you stay silent,
your eyes down I just feel something benevolent!
your utter silence too I feel vibes that are so clear,
much that every second of my life makes me feel dear!
still wonder I met you in some clear accident,
in all means I would say, it is nothing but always so succulent!
just with you and never before I had this feel,
surely it all must can never be any surreal!
even if you say I must assess myself,
can take a life time recess finding itself!
still I would say it is a finesse of such surpass!
Not at all any surreal....true romantic hearty words....thank you- full marks10
Myself! Facing the ways of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Mind expression and emotion wave in one poem. very impressive and done in an artistic sentences. Very good.
‘…never be any surreal’…I agree … You’re in Real’ love romance as you’re in your recess already what I can assess.. Thanks sharing 10/10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
it has been so long since I last read your poems..that's a nice one indeed. thanks for sharing. (please read mine'plants in agony')
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
it has been so long since I last read your poems..that's a nice one indeed. thanks for sharing. (please read mine'plants in agony')