Feelings Poem by Deep Sangani

Feelings

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I Am
I am the quiet eager wave hidden in the sea,
I am the hidden treasure among the glimmering gold,
I am the happiness to the souls of the people,
I am the eager soul trying to come out with all force,
I am the avid soul trying to smile through the darkest of times,
I am the valiant soul trying to take my impatience into control,
I am the perturbed soul crying under the shadow of injustice yet undeniable love,
I am what I have made myself,
A little bit of everything.
Eccentric, hopeful, creative, jocular, nervous and humorous.
With a song going in my head and bobbing side-to-side through each moment,
I am whom people call Deep.
With a little dream to be able to par my limitations in certain aspects of life,
I live up a life of hope and desire.
I am happy,
Satisfied with all that has come along.
But I am eager to know what happens next,
In these picturesque chapters of life

Feelings
Friday, February 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My feelings.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 04 May 2017

Happiness, eager soul. valiant soul, perturbed soul, Eccentric, hopeful, creative, jocular, nervous and humorous. But I am eager to know what happens next, In these picturesque chapters of life. This final verse is so fine. I read your poem very well. Thank you very much. tony

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Chinedu Dike 17 February 2017

Beautiful philosophical piece of poetry insightfully brought forth with conviction. Good rendition of words. Thanks for sharing Deep.

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Deep Sangani 18 February 2017

Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it :)

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