Feelings Poem by Dernell Antoine

Feelings

Rating: 5.0


If love was air
and i was love
i will show you i care
because i, you will always be breathing of

It means more to love
someone if that's all you are dreaming of
but to be loved in returned
feelings sink at the bottom of the ocean
like a stone.

This is what you do to me
you take my breath away with beauty
so magical
left my heart broken so motional
and took the pieces, lost it in the sea intentional.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
H K 22 August 2008

Your words are so deep, those who have deep feelings are the ones who have kept this world going..... beautiful poem

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