Feel The Light! Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Feel The Light!

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Life will give you gifts, at times, when
you are not ready to receive them:

feel the gratitude!

Life will offer you splendorous surprises
before you finish mourning the past:

step into the light!

You have become comfortable in obscurity,
the light, however bright, frightens you:

believe in light!

You have become a creature of darkness,
you fear to show your face to your fate:

fate loves you more!

You no longer love; you no longer hope;
life was fierce; it made you lose your faith:

today, you feel the Light again!

Tuesday, December 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,light,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kingsley Egbukole 17 December 2019

Regardless of the past, pick yourself up and embrace the good things of life...10.

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Tom Allport 28 February 2020

A wonderful write of those that have seen the light.......well penned

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 December 2019

Ah such subtlety, such a depth, and in a few lines you have covered a lot to mull over. Marvellous indeed.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 December 2019

Simply amazing, dear Ma’am Mihaela... Well conveyed...10++

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Jankovic Zoran 17 December 2019

" ...You have become a creature of darkness, you are afraid to show your face to your fate..." Exellent my dear, when the stain removal operation is completed then the blind of love are also seen.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2019

A magnificent piece of work! Beautiful expression! Appreciated and admired.....Full marks!

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