Fear Factor Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Fear Factor
Fear factor
Tuesday,7th July 2020
If God had not put the fear factor!
we all could have taken over
the entire earth and become ruthless
with a crooked smile on the face
the fear factor always reminds
and he finds himself
in the hopeless position
with nothing in possession
his mind works in some other direction
how to make use of with exploitation?
what shall be the loss or gain!
and this gives him constant pain
he is never satisfied
despite all the things are lied
his expectations are belied
as on things, it has been relied upon
the mind has become directionless
and explores sinner ways
no positive feedback is accepted
and on wrong things, it is prompted
Hasmukh Mehta
The fear factor is so nicely expressed in the poem! The actions of the mind are very aptly described in these lines... the mind has become directionless and explores sinner ways no positive feedback is accepted and on wrong things, it is prompted Thanks for sharing Hasmukh Ji! Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India, Jul 07,2020
the mind has become directionless and explores sinner ways no positive feedback is accepted and on wrong things, it is prompted Hasmukh Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Fear factor well expressed, especially last stanza. True and meaningful. he is never satisfied despite all the things have lied his expectations are belied as on things, it has been relied upon Very true. Loved these lines. Fear factor works if we see its positive side. Liked it Meenakshi Joshi, Indore, Jul 08,2020
and explores sinner ways no positive feedback is accepted and on wrong things, it is prompted Ujjal Mandal, West Bengal
he is never satisfied despite all the things have lied his expectations are belied as on things, it has been relied upon Very true. Loved these lines. Fear factor works if we see its positive side. Liked it Meenakshi Joshi, Indore, Jul 08,2020
The fear factor is so nicely expressed in the poem! The actions of the mind are very aptly described in these lines... the mind has become directionless and explores sinner ways no positive feedback is accepted and on wrong things, it is prompted Thanks for sharing Hasmukh Ji!
Fear factor well expressed, especially last stanza. True and meaningful. Anand kumar, Chennai, Jul 08,2020
Loved the lines the mind has become directionless and explores sinner ways no positive feedback is accepted and on wrong things, it is prompted Ujjal Mandal, West Bengal
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the mind has become directionless and explores sinner ways no positive feedback is accepted and on wrong things, it is prompted Hasmukh Mehta