C.J. Sage

(California)

Fawn Ghazal


Inside a snowy blanket which put the trees to sleep,
I heard a fawn.
Out past the window's ice coat in the morning, I
found a sleeping fawn.

There are men in yellow kitchens watching hands of
brown-eyed women
while men in orange jackets dream in secret, of
capturing a fawn.

When I was younger I was taught, but have forgotten,
sweet timidity.
When I am older I will learn, by necessity, the
light-footedness of fawns.

Someone left a lily on my doorstep, eggshell white
with speckled leaves;
the card of introduction said the flower's name was
Fawn.

Sages wonder if it's possible for men to turn to
animals.
I wonder if they've pondered the agility of fawns.


Submitted by Joe Shields

Submitted: Monday, January 13, 2003

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  • Rookie Hashem S (3/27/2014 7:35:00 PM)

    Very beautiful indeed! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 180 Points Connie Marcum Wong (3/26/2014 11:04:00 PM)

    I am so glad to have found this charming poem being featured here. I am giving it a # 10 because I was touched by it. Blessings and Aloha (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nikita K (3/26/2012 9:02:00 AM)

    I liked the second last verse very much. Nice poem.

    May I invite you to read my poem Sweet Surrender

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/sweet-surrender-10/ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nikita K (3/26/2012 9:01:00 AM)

    I liked the second last verse very much. Very good poem.

    May I invite you the read my poem Sweet Surrender

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/sweet-surrender-10/ (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,475 Points Michael Morgan (3/26/2012 7:30:00 AM)

    This is a very nice poem, I think, and deserves a much higher rating than given. Very engaging. (Report) Reply

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