Fatamorgana Fatale Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Fatamorgana Fatale

Rating: 5.0


live as like
as you wish
under crowned
and adorned palace

search for unhandy happiness
and camouflage richness
in bombastic nights
and arrogant days

when fragile souls
no longer can
breathe air because
of narrowed chest

O dear, from now on
you can absolutely realizes
as time and chance passed
you has already being fooled

(dedicated to a geat poet at poemhunter, Bonnie Collins)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luwi Habte 15 May 2009

oh! you reslly do know the great poets of poem hunter this too...good job

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Omar Ibrahim 23 May 2009

your poems are unique.......i liked Indonisia because of you.

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Catrina Heart 21 May 2009

righteousness always win in a battle! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! In God's blessings..........

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Louis Rams 17 May 2009

the free will of man, will always survive

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Aldo Kraas 17 May 2009

This poem is two thumbs up

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Sandra Martyres 17 May 2009

Yes life is all about choices and exercising them..Nice write but you need to run a check on the last stanza..

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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