Far Away Poem by Aakash Goyal

Far Away

Rating: 5.0


When I tried to talk to you, u dint seem interested
And when I called you, you picked up and disconnected.

Sometimes I get scared that I won't see you again
And I really can't figure out how deep is my pain.

Sometimes I wonder whether I ll be able to tell you all this
Or will I just keep writing stuff like this
But as an optimist I am I ll definitely gather the courage to show
Show u the pain I have been through
And show you how it feels to be far away from you.

It's been almost three months now but to me it's like living in hell for more than three years.

So far away
Been far away for far too long
I keep dreaming u ll be wid me and u never go
Stop breathing if I don't see you anymore.

I miss you a lot and wonder whether u miss me or not
Everytime u pass by me I wish u stop
Stop and say
''I love you
And I have missed you all along
And I forgive you for being away for far too long
Keep breathing coz I am not leaving u anymore
Believe it, hold on to me and never let me go''

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Expectant hope in waiting! I enjoyed the read. Well done; D

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Aakash Goyal 12 June 2010

thanx a lot Ms.Nivedita.....i have read some of ur poems and they are really great.. thank u once again: -)

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Very passionate poetry Where expecting resonance from other side…this waiting is charming…nice diction 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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